CRYING
{and other gerunds}
Warning! This exercise has not been entirely worked out.
Try not taking
it too seriously (unless you wish). The idea is to
have fun, and maybe to get some new ideas started.
paul pekin
Little Arne, age two, has added gerunds to his vocabulary.
Suddenly he
understands there are words that describe actions and abstractions
as
well as mere objects. Crying seems to be one of those words.
"Arne,"
we say. "What is crying?" Then we demonstrate by
wailing a little bit
ourselves. So he does it. The same with jumping,
running, and
yelling, all of which he seems to like better than crying. He's
a
little bit suspicious of "crying." I think he suspects we are
trying to
slip in some sort of a message. Stop crying over nothing,
you silly
baby! He's not ready for that. I think
he kind of likes to cry.
Maybe we all do.
Anyway, here's the new exercise. Let's take one of these
gerunds and
put it through its paces. And let's use crying first.
Warmup.
A place where there was crying. (Suggestion:
We're not talking
tragedy here. We don't exclude it, but why get that heavy
right off
the bat? )
A person who cried a lot. (Suggestion: use
your imagination. Stretch
the definition of crying. Maybe even of person!)
How it feels to cry. (Suggestion: Not
how it feels to be sad, just
how it feels to cry)
Finally, a list. Things that make people cry.
(Suggestion:
deliberately exclude all real tragedy. Or at least save it for
the
end.)
Okay, now lets try a couple of other Arne's gerunds.
Jumping.
A place where there is a lot of jumping. (If this gets
silly, so be
it.)
A person who does a lot of jumping–or maybe only jumps once!
How it feels to jump.
Running.
Same deal but try to make it interesting.
One last one. A personal favorite:
Sleeping.
Okay, you get the idea.. There's no certain way this
should be done
other than you should try to take it in stride.
You can do them all,
choose only one, write short images, build an entire story, whatever
you
find pleasing. Try making at least one up. But not
all.
Post the results and we'll comment.
ppekin@megsinet.net
We were all jumping. The idea was to touch the strings
on the
basket. We didn't know that by the time we were old
men kids our
age would be performing slam dunks. We didn't even know
what a slam
dunk was. I'd run down the court and straight at the basket.
Up I'd
go, down I'd come. "Did I get close?" I'd ask my
friends. Finally
we got out a springboard, but the coach wouldn't let us aim
it at
the basket. We had to run for all we were worth,
sprong off the
board, dive head first onto the mat, and somersault
to safety.
Next we jumped over one of our friends who would flinch mightily
when
we took off. I'd run for all
I was worth, sprong, hit the
springboard, and actually be flying for a second. It
all happened so
long ago, I've forgotten how it felt. Except
in dreams. In
dreams I can still fly. I can jump, and
jump higher, and jump
higher. No effort at all. Up I go, and
finally I am drifting
above the world. If we were only cats, perhaps we
would not need to
fly.
pp
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